Revising Essay 1 Thesis Statement

  • Due Feb 9, 2016 by 1:15pm
  • Points 7
  • Submitting a discussion post
  • Available after Feb 9, 2016 at 12pm
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Cut and paste your original Essay 1 thesis statement into your discussion post. Below that, draft a new thesis statement. Use the following format:

Original thesis: xxxx

Revised thesis: xxxxx

 

 

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