Self-Reflection 3: Persuade.
- Due May 19, 2013 by 11:59pm
- Points 10
- Submitting a file upload
Spend some time reflecting on the recording of your speech (and later, in your second reflection paper, compare each speech to each other), and then write a 500-600 word evaluation of your presentation (in paragraph form).
What were the specific strengths you believe you demonstrated? What were specific areas of weakness that you believe diminished the effectiveness of the presentation? Remember, it is NOT sufficient to focus your evaluation entirely on the negatives or solely on delivery. Also, cite specific observations from your recording. If you get stuck, you might find it useful to consider the following questions:
Preparation:
- What did you do to prepare for this speech?
- What might you have done (or will you try to do for the next speech) differently in order for a more effective speech?
Introduction:
- How effective was your attention-getting strategy?
- How effective were you at establishing credibility?
- How effectively did you try to relate this topic to your audience?
Body/content:
- Although you were familiar with the content of your speech, your audience was only exposed to it for five to eight minutes or so. Were you clear in your theme?
- How would you revise your speech so that you could improve it?
- What can you say about the organization of your speech?
- Were your ideas developed thoroughly?
- You might even consider looking at your strongest (or your weakest) transition and stating why you think it was effective (or ineffective).
- Did you address the specific areas of focus for this particular speech?
Conclusion:
- Did you clearly summarize key points from your speech?
- Did you leave your audience with a lasting impression?
Delivery:
- What were your strengths?
- What do you need to improve?
- Did your delivery fit the mood of the speech?
- How effectively did you utilize the presentation aid?
- Did you use utilize effective vocal and physical delivery?
Rubric
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I have used full, single sentences (not paragraphs) on all components (you may use multiple sentences in the intro & conclusion).
All main points are single declarative sentences.
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I have included, prior to the introduction: Topic, Organizational Pattern (either Problem/Solution or the Motivated Sequence), Specific Purpose, and Thesis Statement.
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My thesis statement is stated as a proposition (question) of public policy and has been integrated into my introduction.
It is also at main point II and includes a who, a what, and a why.
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My introduction includes: Attention Getter, Indicated Purpose (puts my topic in a context that is relevant to my audience), Established Credibility, and Preview of My Main Points (states thesis and previews my main points).
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My conclusion includes: Review of My Main Points (summarizes the speech), Reinforcement of My Purpose (connects to my introduction and reminds audience why my topic is relevant to them), and Provided Closure.
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I have used the correct format for numeration and indented my points and sub points properly. (I, A, 1, a.).
Other rules to consider-
1 sentence per symbol
1 idea per symbol
At least 2 levels of subordination (no A without a B, no 1 without a 2 etc).
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I have included full-sentence connectives/transitions between each of my main points.
I also have an effective transition moving into the body and one moving into the conclusion.
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I have labeled the specific type of reasoning I'm using in the body of the speech and it is free of reasoning fallacies
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I have highlighted and labeled at least three pieces of supporting material
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I have proofread this outline for spelling and grammatical errors.
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I have exercised academic integrity and given credit where credit is due.
Ex. According to the National Institute of Health, as reported in last month's press release, 45% of Americans....(NIH, 2013-fact_).
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I have attached a separate APA style reference sheet at the back of my outline and have included at least four properly cited, credible sources.
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